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oh, and everything made perfect scene -- I Proud member of =DeathNotefan cub Cant spell Holly without L why is L made for me? We have the same birthday, we both have improper pousture, love sugar, and HATE Kira!! -- Thundering hearts, Pounding hooves, Flying over hills, valleys and grooves, He is the shadow, The stars in the sky, We are not earth-bound, So lets take off and fly. Commish: [link] hey dont worry about it, I love all crits
-- I Proud member of =DeathNotefan cub Cant spell Holly without L why is L made for me? We have the same birthday, we both have improper pousture, love sugar, and HATE Kira!! |
On a real horse, when looking at conformation, you should imagine an invisible line where the girth should go - on this pic about a cm back from the base of the forleg - there should be the same amount of horse infront as behind. As you can see, Will's rear is longer than his front.
For the next point, His fetlock is a tiny bit long on his front left - the shape and actual joining to the hoof and leg are perfect, just long
Okay, so next, lets look at the legs. If you image a horses leg only has limited movement; you will see that his fore right leg is kind of awkward. A horse could have his hoof there, but theleg is slightly too far forward at the base. If you image he has his chest facing away from us slightly, his right leg will look further back... Does that make sense?? lol, probably not!
Hmm... my last point would be to make the head bigger and the neck longer... Thats about it though!
Sorry this was kinda long, its only tiny things I just wanted to point out